Wow. Wow! This is good on so many levels! Great artwork and a short, tight plot. Excellent.
As an aside, I see you're a Neil Gaiman fan? There was a great profile on him in last week's New Yorker. In case you didn't see it, here's a link: http://www.newyorker.com/reporting/2010/01/25/100125fa_fact_goodyear
Interesting. A story told in so few words. This is a nice unique take on the Fridayflash concept!
ReplyDeleteWow. Wow! This is good on so many levels! Great artwork and a short, tight plot. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteAs an aside, I see you're a Neil Gaiman fan? There was a great profile on him in last week's New Yorker. In case you didn't see it, here's a link: http://www.newyorker.com/reporting/2010/01/25/100125fa_fact_goodyear
Ooo! I like it! I like it a lot! There should be more comic-strip #fridayflash! :)
ReplyDeleteTerrific panels! Very talented artwork and intriguing story with few words.
ReplyDeleteExcellent! graphic flash fiction!
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing! Showing and telling!
ReplyDeleteNeil Gaiman would approve. :)
Ack! Brilliant. Very well said for so few words.
ReplyDeleteLove it! Nice quick punch in the gut. Great work!
ReplyDeleteThis is cool. And I love the newspaper headline. Nice touch.
ReplyDeleteWow! What an awesome twist on #fridayflash! Love the artwork
ReplyDeleteYou're an visual artist too?! A visual Senryu! Wow.
ReplyDeleteVery cool idea and great execution!
ReplyDeleteI kept scrolling down looking for the story...wow really great and great graphic
ReplyDeleteDid he order pie?
ReplyDeleteI tell you, you should never piss off a waitress.
I like this a lot. But I have a policy of not tipping waitresses that pull a gun on me....
ReplyDeleteSeriously cool. Great artwork. Awesome!
ReplyDeleteHuh. Graphic flash. Cool. I like it.
ReplyDeleteWow! This was a really flashy (but in a good way) Friday flash. Yeah, you never know what those new waitresses are up to.
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Ah, maybe all isn't quite as it seems in the all night diner.
ReplyDeletevery cool.
I love this on so many levels.
ReplyDeleteVery, very cool!
ReplyDelete*intake of breath* You can draw too! Wow! Love the comic book feel.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant, great drawing, great story and great flash fiction. very impressive.
ReplyDeleteOoh, a graphic story. Nice structure.
ReplyDeleteWow. Pithy and to the point. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteOh, wow!
ReplyDeleteGreat comic book layout, I think was the briefest flash I've read so far. And the illustrations were wonderful too :)
Very cool - clever idea for a #fridayflash! :-)
ReplyDeleteYou are adorable and lovely. Thanks for being you.
ReplyDeleteA brilliant idea to use a comic strip to do the fridayflash. This is inspiring. And the story is so economical and concise.
ReplyDeleteExcellant, a comic strip for Flash Friday! I loved your post. Thank You.
ReplyDeleteVery cool! Talk about a compelling snapshot! What happens next? :-)
ReplyDeleteIt is a wonderful drawing, but in terms of a story looks like panel number one to me.
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